strawberry saliva

Oh my goodness! i have to admit; that is the best story i have ever read in the romantic fiction category. Even my own stuff isn't that good. Wow!! i ...

thanks bradsk88, for the review. i'll try to do what you said.

is this really about dirt? are you supposed to be a worm or something? i'm sorry that i don't get it. but it flows pretty well. the dirt is suposed ...

i just love ur second line. it was pretty poetic. it is really dramatic. i like the way you held the suspense until the very end. good piece of writing.

That was nice. i also have an extremely sarcastic friend. i mean he actually speaks sarcasm as a second language. all in all i think it was a great piece.

i love your piece. everything else has been said. taht part about loving someonelike mad, i like it. that's because i use it alot. i don't find a problem with ...

it was good. can't wit for the next part of it!